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    Original Content Because Someone Had To, Chapter 3

    This sums up the rewrite! Took Part 3 and Four of the original and rolled it into one final chapter. The original version of this story was, after all, very short. Chapter 2, Pt 3 ----- The kil'tan child's carapace rattled as its plates flexed and clacked together nervously. Even the children...
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    Original Content Because Someone Had To, Chapter 2, Pt 3

    Chapter 2, Pt 2 | Chapter 3 ----- The Admiral was pale as updates from the main battle kept coming forward. It had been so one-sided at first; dozens of Council and Senate ships crippled or destroyed. Her fleet's guns were bigger. Shields stronger. Armour thicker. Her crews and captains were...
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    Original Content Because Someone Had To, Chapter 2, Pt 2

    Chapter 2, pt 1 | Chapter 2, Pt 3 ----- An hour into the battle, and the Grand Admiral had begun to realize something. A second and third Kelliant Consortium vessel was crippled in rapid succession, both struck and sunk by the human torpedoes. The weapons were too fast, too maneuverable...
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    Original Content Because Someone Had To, Chapter 2 Pt 1

    As part of the ongoing edit/rewrite of this story...well, I had already done a major rewrite of part 2, which is now 'chapter 2.' There has been some additional editing done from its second iteration, but over all no major changes here. Chapter 1 | Chapter 2, Pt 2 ----- The children were...
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    Original Content Because Someone Had To, Chapter 1

    So for reasons that mostly elude me, I've decided to do a complete rewrite of the first story I posted on HFY!, some year or so back. Exactly what no one asked for...yes I'm still working on a one-off for Eth's time at the naval academy for War Isn't Hell, and am stewing on some ideas that may...
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